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Guillotte

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I Want British Opinions!
« on: June 05, 2009, 08:19 AM »
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Read the note and watch. Give me feedback because it can only help.


Offline Dex Dexter

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Re: I Want British Opinions!
« Reply #1 on: June 05, 2009, 09:35 AM »
I didn't expect that.

I'm no expert in these things but I thought it was good.  Captured the emotion really well at the end.

I wasn't looking at camera angles or things like that - more the story.

But genuinely - very good.

Only points for consideration.  The music didn't flow for me - really liked some (was one piece Linkin Park?) but it seemed to jump about a bit - would have been nice if it flowed across the whole piece better.

I understood the flashback bit when the guy was talking to his sister but I didn't get it immediately though.

Just one uneducated opinion mind - but good - I had a twinge of emotion at the end.

 :daumenhoch:


Offline oberonspacefruit

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Re: I Want British Opinions!
« Reply #2 on: June 05, 2009, 09:47 AM »
Looks like a lot of work for just 12 hours. Some good angles, you did a much better job than I would have been able to do.
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Re: I Want British Opinions!
« Reply #3 on: June 06, 2009, 06:37 PM »
nice work :daumenhoch:

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Re: I Want British Opinions!
« Reply #4 on: June 07, 2009, 09:01 AM »
Cool   :daumenhoch:


I would agree the music could use some tweaks, and I was expecting a different, more obvious ending.  Liked it though  :)

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